The above given three pie charts indicate the alteration of spending of a school in certain years in 1981, 1991 and 2001 in the UK. Overall, it is obvious that in 1981 and a decade later chiefly figures are similar, while in 2001 approximately all numbers change markedly.
Apparently, while teachers’ salaries increased significantly from 40% to 50%, other workers’ salaries dwindled marginally from 28% to 22%, in 1981 and 1991 relatively. Likewise, the percentage of insurance and resources such as books ascended, although the proportion of furniture and equipment reduced threefold from 15% in 1981 to 5% in 1991.
By contrast to former years, in 2001 figures changed noticeably. While the percentage of furniture and equipment was one of the lowest figure of 5% in 1991, it soared dramatically to 23% in 2001. Unlike furniture, the number for other workers’ salaries and resources had become a half as it was former years.
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