You and your friend went for a vacation. Upon returning, you realized that some of the photos that you clicked have been lost/corrupted. Write a letter to your friend.
1. Ask him to send those photos that you have lost/have got corrupted.
2. Explain how you lost them.
3. Request for additional special photos that your friend had clicked.
Dear Ramesh,
I hope this letter find you in good health. We had great time when we went to Nandihills for a vacation. I am writing this letter to get some of the photos that you clicked.
After coming back to my hometown, to my surprise, I noticed that some of the photos were missing and some were torn in mysterious circumstances. After researching about the incident, I concluded that this mishap happened due to a sharp knife that I was carrying in my bag. The knife damaged the bottom portion of my bag and ended up creating a hole. Due to this, some of the pictures got dropped and lost while other pictures got cut randomly. In lieu of my unfortunate situation, I would request you to provide copies of some of the photos in which we both were captured. In addition, send the pictures in which we captured breath-taking nature beauty.
To conclude, I hope you understand the significance of retaining those mind-blowing pictures and send a copy of the requested ones at the earliest.
Love,
Kishore
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