You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter
· give details of your course and your arrival/departure date
· explain your accommodation needs
· ask for information about getting to and from the college
Dear Sir,
Just for your early information I have nominated my name for Life Insurance training in your reputed college. The training is being scheduled for 5 days starting 07 Sept 2015 to 11 Sept 2015. To attend the training I would be reaching on 06 Sept evening and leave on 12 Sept 2015.
I need your help to arrange accommodation for me starting 06 Sept 2015. Since I am pure vegetarian is it possible whether you can arrange separate accommodation for me as I would like to cook my own food. Probably cooking facility is available in the apartment. Can you please accommodate me with some vegetarian student if single accommodation is not possible. In addition, please confirm whether basic facilities would be provided like pillow and bed-sheet in the apartment or need to carry these along with me.
Moreover as I am new to this place, can you please let me know on the travel details from the apartment to college? Additionally, how long would be the apartment from the railway station as I would be traveling by train. Besides this I have one more question. Is there any shopping center nearby as I heard some of the items are bit cheaper in this place like watches and toys.
I am looking forward to hearing soon from you.
Yours faithfully
Michael
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starting 07 Sept 2015 to 11 Sept 2015.
starting from 07 Sept 2015 to 11 Sept 2015.
for me starting 06 Sept 2015.
for me starting from 06 Sept 2015.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 10
No. of Words: 223 200
No. of Characters: 1015 1000
No. of Different Words: 130 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.864 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.552 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.646 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 66 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 57 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.938 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.004 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.679 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.159 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4