You are looking for a part-time job.Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter - introduce yourself - explain what sort of job you would like - and say what experience and skills you haveWrite at least 150 words.

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You are looking for a part-time job.

Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter

- introduce yourself
- explain what sort of job you would like
- and say what experience and skills you have

Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir,

My name is Luca and I am 21 years old. I am a currently studying Machine tool operation at Giuseppe Zanardelli school in London.

I am looking for a part time Job and I hope you will be able to help me. I would like to work as a machine tool operator since I have been studying it for about 4 years. As you can see from my resume, I have worked in mechanical area during my trainee period for the past 3 year in several well known firm as well as Sturla e Frusca Srl and Cierre Meccanica. However, If there is no position available in my Field, any other occupation according to my res...

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