You have a facebook friend living in country and he/she is curious to learn abt a major news items in your country.
Write a letter to your facebook friend. In your letter
1. Describe a news story in your country
2. Explain why people are interested in it
3. Say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Sam,
Thanks for writing to me last month and I am really happy to know that you got promoted to senior Manager. I am writing to you in relation to the news of resignation of Delhi chief minister Mr Arvind Kejriwal that you mentioned in your letter.
Mr Kejriwal resigned from the post of chief minister of Delhi only after 49 day of taking an oath for chief minister. He had promised the people of India that he will make sure that an important ordinance will be passes by Indian assembly on corruption. However , due to not able to keep his promise, he finally resigned.
This news is of very importance for the people of Delhi as well as whole of India due to the fact that there is general election planned in next couple of months. In addition to this, Mr Kejariwal belongs to political party which was formed just 5-6 months back and in state election for Delhi where he formed the Government, nobody anticipated this. The member of his party are from varied professional background so this was his acid test before general election.
I was particularly interested in this news because I really impressed by Mr Kejariwal and his party and it will help in deciding my vote in coming general elections.
I hope this will clear your doubt and give your insight into the news. Eagerly waiting for your comment for the same.
Thanking you,
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an important ordinance will be passes by
an important ordinance will be passed by
The member of his party are from varied professional background
The members of his party are from varied professional backgrounds
because I really impressed by Mr Kejariwal
because I was really impressed by Mr Kejariwal
Eagerly waiting for your comment for the same.
Eagerly waiting for your comments for the same.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Words: 242 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 242 200
No. of Characters: 1084 1000
No. of Different Words: 138 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.944 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.479 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.383 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 71 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.498 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.304 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.763 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.185 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4