You looked after your friend’s house while he was away on holidays? During the period you have damaged something in his house. Write to him and say- Explain what it happened What is the estimated cost of repairs? What are you going to do about it?

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You looked after your friend’s house while he was away on holidays? During the period you have damaged something in his house. Write to him and say-
Explain what it happened
What is the estimated cost of repairs? What are you going to do about it?

Dear Mr. Ram,

Hope you are enjoying the vacations. I have to inform you with a deep regret that I have done a mistake while living in your habitation. Allow me to elaborate this matter.

As you know, I am fond of playing games with buddies during my leisure time. Yesterday, I was playing cricket with one of my fast friend in the front of the house but unfortunately, when I played a short then the ball hit the glass of living room’s window. At that time, I was shocked and saw the glass has been broken into several pieces. Inclusively, the replacement cost of glass is around seventy dollars.

However, do not worry about this matter; I will exchange that glass before you reach at home. I will pay all the repair expenses because it was happened due to my negligence.

Hope you understand my situation and apologize me for this fault.

With lots of love,
Sam
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before you reach at home
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