You recently read an article in a magazine, which was very useful for your work. You would like to recommend it to a friend. Write a letter to him/her and say
- What was the article about?
- Where did you read it?
- Why is it useful for your job?
Dear Ramesh,
How are you? I hope you have been well. I would like to share you an important article regarding the efficient way to handle memory management technique in ERP system. The column contain detailed description of the problem and various way to solve the issue which is very useful in our work.
As you know, I frequently visit out company’s library. I have read this article in PC Quest magazine which was published on November 2014 edition. This article is the main topic of the magazine and is huge demand among the IT professionals.
As you aware that, apart from the functionality, performance of the system plays an important role in the product, and memory management is the main hurdle of the performance. By applying the tricks of the article we can enhance the quality of the product. Even we can spread this knowledge to others which is very helpful to our company.
I would like you to read the article and provide your suggestions and thoughts.
Warm Regards,
Smitesh
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- You have recently participated in a training course. Write a letter and give feedback to the organiser. - Give details about the course. - What did you like about the course? - Give some suggestions for improvement. 88
- You recently read an article in a magazine, which was very useful for your work. You would like to recommend it to a friend. Write a letter to him/her and say- What was the article about? - Where did you read it? - Why is it useful for your job? 70
The column contain detailed description and various way to solve the issue which is very useful in our work.
The column contains detailed descriptions and various ways to solve the issue, which is very useful in our work.
and is huge demand among the IT professionals.
and has huge demand among the IT professionals.
and is on huge demand among the IT professionals.
Even we can spread this knowledge to others which is very helpful to our company.
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