You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course, describe your problems and find out if a refund is possible.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this to inquire about possibility of partial participation in the two-month intensive Tennis course that is slated to begin from the summer, next month.
A week ago, I saw an advertisement in ‘The Guardian’ news channel about this course. As I am very interested in sports, especially in Tennis, I would like to participate in this Tennis course that is organized by you. Since my University classes are about to complete this month prior to summer, I will be free almost for a month to actively engage in my favorite sport, Tennis.
Fortunately, I also have to utilize this vacation by meeting my parents after a month of the course start date, so I booked a ticket to go to my country. I am afraid that I will not be able to attend the full course. Hence, I wonder if I could get half of the refund of my course fee. I would be grateful if you could provide me a fifty percent of cash back at the end of the first month of the course.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Krrish
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inquire about possibility of partial participation
inquire about the possibility of a partial participation
Fortunately, I also have to utilize this vacation by meeting my parents
Unfortunately, I also have to utilize this vacation by meeting my parents
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