You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart indicates the figures of the prediction of world illiteracy rates by regions: Developed countries, Latin America, East Asia, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, South Asia and by sex.
At first glance, the greatest illiterate rate belonged to South Asia for both men and women, with around 33% and well under 55%, respectively. Arab States possessed the second place for the number of the illiterate male, around 30%. By contrast, the least rate illiteracy for male as well as female was developed countries, just about 1% for men and 2% for women. As for Latin America, there was nearly the same numbers in illiteracy for sexes, 10% for men and 11% for women. In East Asia, the number of illiterate women was more than double than that of men, just about 20% and nearly 9%.
It is concluded that South Asia owned the largest number of illiterate people, Arab States had the second place for women illiteracy and Sub –Saharan Africa was responsible for the third position of illiterate female.
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At first glance
At the first glance
was more than double than that of men,
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Don't need:
'by regions: Developed countries, Latin America, East Asia, Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, South Asia and by sex.'
simply 'by regions and sex'
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 171 200
No. of Characters: 798 1000
No. of Different Words: 90 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.616 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.667 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.44 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 31 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.429 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.973 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.501 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.669 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4