You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Ask them for help finding accommodation. Tell him where you would like to live. Tell them also the type of place you are looking for.

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You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Ask them for help finding accommodation. Tell him where you would like to live. Tell them also the type of place you are looking for.

Dear Mike,

How are you? I am good! Hope you and your family are having a great time in the city of Calgary in Canada. As I was slated to move to Calgary on work purpose in an intra-company transfer, I am requesting you to find a suitable accommodation that caters my need.

It’s been a decade since you immigrated to Alberta so I firmly believe that places in Calgary city would have become a part and parcel of your life. Last week, surprisingly, I have been given an on-site offer for the position of ‘Senior Software Engineer’ from my company that asks me to relocate to Canada permanen...

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