Your find that your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses. Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund.
You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Prof. James,
I am writing to formally request to withdraw from two courses: Introduction to Elementary Education (EDU602) and Teaching Methods (EDU 619)
The main reason for reducing my course load is that I am finding it extremely difficult to manage six courses. In the beginning of the term, I was perhaps overly optimistic about juggling both my full time studies and my part time job (20 hours/week). Because I really must work part time, I have no other choice but to decrease my course load. I am planning on taking the two courses during the summer semester, if they are available...
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 209 200
No. of Characters: 929 1000
No. of Different Words: 141 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.802 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.445 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.571 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 64 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 47 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.929 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.339 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.335 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.729 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.164 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4