The 2 maps below show the changes that have taken place in Felixstone from 1967 to 2001.
Summarise the best relevant points and make comparisons where relevant
The maps illustrate the changes to the changes have occured in Felixtone over a 30 year period beginning in 1967 and ending in 2001. The most noticable change is the replacement of green areas with several major infrastructure projects except a golf court and dunes.
To begin, there were several changes to the business sector in Felixstone. A block of apartments has been built just east of the High street opposite of the row of shops. In addition to this, a sports centre including double tennis courts and a swimming pool with a new hotel that stands ¼ part of the area. Wind turbines can be seen behind the dunes alongside the sea bed, and 2 artificial beaches, one private and one public, have been built together on the south side of the Main road passed by the middle of the town. However, the pier and the Marina have been totally removed from the town.
There have also been changes to transport, particularly to the right of the dunes, where large car park now stands in place of the hotel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61666666667 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39930545506 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3460446795 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145939626411 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616707827629 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639402415342 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1087461059 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423934178975 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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