There are a number of merits of online shopping. First and foremost is that it can save time. Let me bring this issue to the light. You should get dressed and drive or walk to shopping centers. So being in traffic is unwanted and it definitely waste your time. Another good point is you can search for everything and they are available at the moment. Some times we go to a shopping center and look for a particular thing, but unfortunately we can't find it. We can simply be in our house and check every sites on the internet and can access to more centers at the time. So it would be easier.
On the other hand, We should consider that there are some disadvantages of online shopping. For example, we can't trust online markets for buying clothes. We should put them up to see weather they are fit or not. As well as this, There are some differences between the photo of stuff and the real side of them. So We can not trust them and it is better if we see that stuff and check it personally, then buy it.Specially when it has high cost and worthy and its important to us not to buy the fake one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wastes'?
Suggestion: wastes
...n traffic is unwanted and it definitely waste your time. Another good point is you ca...
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Line 1, column 444, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... particular thing, but unfortunately we cant find it. We can simply be in our house ...
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Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ges of online shopping. For example, we cant trust online markets for buying clothes...
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Line 2, column 410, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Specially
...ff and check it personally, then buy it.Specially when it has high cost and worthy and it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, then, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 5.60731707317 589% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21904761905 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31226641279 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7638795694 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2857142857 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109216720542 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425281573817 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646498459578 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811682394137 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00244008066156 0.0819641961636 3% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 13.2329268293 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.6 11.4140731707 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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