In the ages of technology, online shopping becomes the typical trend that has certain effects on our lives. It is not undeniable that online shopping brings the value of great benefits but it also contains remarkable shortcomings.
It is not always thought that only traditional shopping has pros but online shopping is the same. First, online shopping supports a distinctive feature that is flexibility. This means that users can find their favorable objects without concern about times, the weather, the salesman, the location of the stores, so you only relax at home to spend time in shopping. Second, by conducting online shopping you will have splendid opportunities to search for product information like price, the qualities, the preferential policy, which implies that you can easily make a comparison to appreciate comprehensively the products thanks to surfing on the internet.
It is evident to customers that online shopping also has a series of drawbacks. First and foremost, you can become a victim of fraudulent shops. Specifically, They create a lot of overwhelmed advertisements with excellent qualities to attract customers and they will give their customers the products which are opposite to their information. Second, you also get unnecessary trouble. It points out that, the stores can make mistakes when they give customers the products which strong size, incorrect colors, bad material which spend the amount of time to overcome and maybe has vague results.
As can be seen, there are no complete advantages and disadvantages of online shopping. The effective ways are the customers need to be wise in purchasing and the stores need to be honest in selling, which creates benefits for both sides.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 274.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29197080292 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90105354544 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 106.607317073 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57299270073 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 283.868780488 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.934580084 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294872502492 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122547392665 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12633514713 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171643674547 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724105946166 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.