Nowadays, people usually shop online because of several reasons such as saving time, choosing the clothes they want or saving money. In my opinion, shopping online bring not only the advantages and but also the disadvantages.
First of all, shopping online will help people get full of the information such as material, origin, color, modes, usage. Therefore, they will choose their product easily and save time and money to go to the store because they wait for ten or twenty minutes and then the product come. people can shop online in every time and every where and being comfortable to compare the prices between two store. Shopping online may be faster than traditional shopping. Customer can avoid congestion, smog, high temperature.
Besides that, the product on smartphone screen can be fake such as the wrong color and modes but customer can not return the product and be given a refund. For some product, people can wait more than four or five days to receive the product. In some situation, people is fooled by som fake shopping online website.
In conclusion, although shopping online will bring benifit to customer, they should be careful when shopping online to take the advantages to themselves and their family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03431372549 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44648116454 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593137254902 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8528284302 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3636363636 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303533436806 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142710015051 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128506327568 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230418331682 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111287778599 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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