Allergy

Essay topics:

Allergy

allergy is very common disease now a day, unlike other chronic disease which badly damage the human body allergy has low effect on it, we can say that every 2nd person out of 10 person get affected with it. Its major symptoms includes running nose, flu, watering eyes with cough but their is a rear chance you may get severe attack on your immuse system other than the people already have breath problem associated with lungs disorders etc.

health experts suggest the proper test for identifaction and classification of this disease.To eleborate, many other epidemics have almost the same effects on body like the allergy does. National institute of health, for Instance, have devised a mechanism to pricisley check the cause and generate vaccine accordingly. These vaccines are taken in three consective years to put it on slow action mode.

On the other hand, a special kind of tree name xyz is believed to be primarily factor for spreading this illness, according to a medical based research article recently published in health magazine "ABC of health". They identified a kind of trees which during the spring a special kind of element in the air and with the oxygen it enters in our human body, Doctor association after this medical findings recommend to replace with other kind of tree, and the best method protect from it is to cover a face with mask to easily avoid from it.

Comprehensivly, there is no deniel the fact that people really get sick by its effect, albait, its not like other epedemics which transfer from human to human. Better management and proper medication is the solution to counter this mayhem.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Allergy
allergy is very common disease now a day, unlik...
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Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...can say that every 2nd person out of 10 person get affected with it. Its major symptom...
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Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...nose, flu, watering eyes with cough but their is a rear chance you may get severe att...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Health
...associated with lungs disorders etc. health experts suggest the proper test for ide...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...tion and classification of this disease.To eleborate, many other epidemics have al...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...r spreading this illness, according to a medical based research article recently ...
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Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend replacing'.
Suggestion: recommend replacing
...association after this medical findings recommend to replace with other kind of tree, and the best m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, may, really, so, for instance, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97101449275 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53090537982 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 106.607317073 170% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655797101449 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8799493339 43.030603864 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.444444444 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104458484395 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423051363896 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814042082533 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624497129328 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656264893827 0.0819641961636 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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