The bar chart delineates the percentage of dwellers in cities among six parts of the world which are Africa, Asia, Europe, Latin America/ Carribean, North America and Oceania during 1950, 2007, 2030 years.
Now, turning to the detail, it can be clearly seen that in 1950 the 64% population of Oceania and North America began their life in urbanized regions while, Europeans with Latin Americans remained nearly the half percentage. By contrast, Asia and Africa indications were not as high as other parts of the world, both of them were somewhere in the vicinity of 17 percentage.
The biggest percentage saw in four continents ( Europe, Latin America, North America and Oceania ) nearly 80% in 2007, Asia and Africa followed with tiny proportion than the four one in that year.
Other changes are estimated to happen with losing the position of Oceania to 76% whereas, the trio would reach the peak of percentage just around 90% in 2050. The other continents are suggested to carry on its low number just about 66% in the near future.
Overall, the information is revealed with the fact that Africans and Asians would not have much desire as other population of continents would have acclivations in 2050.
- the charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurant and sitdown restaurant 95
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- The table below gives information about student enrolment at Bristol University in 1928, 1958, and 2008.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iggest percentage saw in four continents Europe, Latin America, North America and...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Latin America, North America and Oceania nearly 80% in 2007, Asia and Africa foll...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97524752475 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47978297351 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.3150539792 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.571428571 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0903180448757 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409286648513 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0229599407724 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0500342876108 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228253919352 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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