The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.
The given chart illustrates the data of the percentage of population living in city area in different continents and globally.
Overall, In 1950 the population was lowest in Africa while North America had highest population it is clear that figure of public in urban area rise in all continent of From 1950 to 2030.
In terms of world, population who live in urban area accounted for about at 29% the it climbed to 49% in 2007 before estimate that it will witness an increased by 11% in 2030.
By comparison of Africa and Asia, approximately same figure stood at 16% in 1950. Then figure will predicted to rocket to 51% and 54% respectively. Regarding Europe, in 2007, 72% population lived in that region before experiencing a stood at 51% in 1950. But it will predicted the 6% increased in 2030.
According to Latin America Caribbean and North America, there was 42% people in Latin America Caribbean compared with 64% people in North America. While, 76% and 79% population was accounting for two nation since it will grow gradually to 84% and 87% in 2030%.
- Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular, even more than banknotes and coins. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Include your personal opinion and examples based on your own experience. 56
- Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown are or out of season. Some people think this is a positive development, but others believe the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified 73
- Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown are or out of season. Some people think this is a positive development, but others believe the use of air transport for this purpose is not justified 73
- Although more and more people read the news on internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in 5 different age groups in the USA between 1850 and 2000. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
...as lowest in Africa while North America had highest population it is clear that figure of p...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...n urban area accounted for about at 29% the it climbed to 49% in 2007 before estimate ...
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Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'predict'
Suggestion: predict
... stood at 16% in 1950. Then figure will predicted to rocket to 51% and 54% respectively. ...
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'predict'
Suggestion: predict
...ing a stood at 51% in 1950. But it will predicted the 6% increased in 2030. According ...
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Line 9, column 201, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'nation' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nations'.
Suggestion: nations
...d 79% population was accounting for two nation since it will grow gradually to 84% and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82065217391 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67633660934 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570652173913 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9908083891 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5555555556 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197623456139 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823411520747 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102522214 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136820501447 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106037101607 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.