The bar chart below illustrates five different industries percentage share of Country B s economy in 2005 and 2015 with a forecast for 2025 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Country B’s economy in 2005 and 2015 with a forecast for 2025.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart compares the proportion of five specific industries accounted for country B’s economy in 1995 and 2015 as well as a projection for 2025.
Looking at the graph, it is readily apparent that the financial industry has taken the lion’s share of the country’s economy with consistent growth, whilst others are predicted to decrease in the future.
By the beginning of the period shown, the economic income from finance, food processing and fossil fuels underwent a rise with growths of approximately 5% for the two former and about 10% for the latter. In contrast, there was a downturn in both tourism and construction with falls of around 5% for the first 10 years period.
Turning next to the projected figures for 2025, only the financial segment is forecast to experience a continued upswing, accounting for merely 41%. However, the tourism sector remains the same as the figures recorded in 2015 while both food processing and fossil fuel stay at 2009 levels with around 11% and 26%, respectively. In comparison, construction see a sharp drop in its rate, falling by a further 10% to 5%.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, well, while, in contrast, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98395721925 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73456088154 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641711229947 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7409982106 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.142857143 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223291159898 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997494039018 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808563629004 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146227288621 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812709161304 0.0819641961636 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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