The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart above illustrates the proportion of various kinds of accommodation selected during holiday in 2010 by British people from different regions including England, Scotland, Wale and Northern Ireland.
It can be seen clearly in the chart above that the preference of people from England, Scotland and wale are merely the same. Hotel was the most preferred type of accommodation. Varying from approximately 49% to 55% in these three regions, it accounted for almost twice the percentage of people having chosen self-catering(almost 30%). By comparison, caravan and camping were far less preferred by people, ranging from 6% in England to 12% in Scotland(Caravan) and 6% in Scotland to 14% in Wales(Camping) respectively.
One region that shows some difference is Northern Ireland, where Caravan was much often chosen as a dream accommodation(around 30%). Following are self-catering and camping, both around 12%.
In generally, hotel is still the first choice for accommodation for most holidaymakers.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'in general']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.290502793296 0.268076937826 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.117318435754 0.116061578633 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0558659217877 0.0759168565197 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.072625698324 0.0366838410393 198% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0111731843575 0.0131127313244 85% => OK
Prepositions: 0.162011173184 0.155750635184 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0558659217877 0.0379272487307 147% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.46810713475 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0167597765363 0.0210936926555 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0670391061453 0.0948980150116 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00558659217877 0.00437022459523 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0111731843575 0.00967000014798 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1005.0 1161.00487805 87% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.9 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.56862745098 5.90752243213 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.392156862745 0.337110787985 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.313725490196 0.247514529752 127% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.235294117647 0.171178102325 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.16339869281 0.112407865282 145% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46810713475 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660130718954 0.546246751206 121% => OK
Word variations: 63.4120063616 49.3433353143 129% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 19.125 23.0094962315 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8602388637 42.9750493124 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.625 135.714022679 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 23.0094962315 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.689975730869 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 50.4975490196 47.7609492067 106% => OK
Elegance: 2.52777777778 2.94281807926 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379719514758 0.418131533498 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113151738074 0.181151798455 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.124593098449 0.0850326197045 147% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.660852433088 0.706616315825 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.228600416883 0.157042692854 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172087653148 0.228904883108 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106215794347 0.108899403657 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.178476005466 0.367819155151 49% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.167175414212 0.0812612215331 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220754451114 0.316326947829 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120510424603 0.0921553760075 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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