The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005.
The chart depicts the approximate percentage of car trips taken by drivers of both genders( men and women) for 8 different purposes( courses, visiting town, bank, running errands, visiting friends, recreation, work and shopping) in 2005.
In overall, most people drove on car trips to work and the least people drove to visit their friends. Both men and women drove, albeit for their own purposes, in the year 2005.
About 15% of women drove to shopping, but only 10% of men did that. Other than that, women drove more than men for the following purposes: to attend courses, for bank visits, running errands and visiting friends, each of them around 10%.
However, men drove to work more than women( around 0% versus approximately 40%). About 10% of car trips taken by men are for recreational purposes, but only 5% of car trips taken by women were. Men visited town more frequently than women( about 10% versus 5% ) .
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- The bar chart below shows the estimated percentage of car trips taken by drivers in 2005. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...by drivers of both genders men and women for 8 different purposes courses, visiti...
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...requently than women about 10% versus 5% .
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...equently than women about 10% versus 5% .
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.30890052356 0.268076937826 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.120418848168 0.116061578633 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0523560209424 0.0759168565197 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0366492146597 0.0366838410393 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0157068062827 0.0131127313244 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.162303664921 0.155750635184 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0418848167539 0.0379272487307 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34704333191 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0261780104712 0.0210936926555 124% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0471204188482 0.0948980150116 50% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 918.0 1161.00487805 79% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.9 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81012658228 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.26582278481 0.337110787985 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.208860759494 0.247514529752 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158227848101 0.171178102325 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0759493670886 0.112407865282 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34704333191 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518987341772 0.546246751206 95% => OK
Word variations: 41.5572362823 49.3433353143 84% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 19.75 23.0094962315 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7892238698 42.9750493124 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 135.714022679 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 23.0094962315 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.689975730869 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 40.6360759494 47.7609492067 85% => OK
Elegance: 2.9696969697 2.94281807926 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2770998188 0.418131533498 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.175263253233 0.181151798455 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0863021140585 0.0850326197045 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.713606544773 0.706616315825 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147947320311 0.157042692854 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1358601573 0.228904883108 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127776186593 0.108899403657 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.317162961976 0.367819155151 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0778306089947 0.0812612215331 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202621423032 0.316326947829 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112705778346 0.0921553760075 122% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.