The bar graph illustrates the calculated sales of jeans in two companies in the coming year in Turkey. The pie chart provides information on the estimated market shares for the two companies in jeans by the end of the following year.
Overall, it can be seen that Jack and Jones is expected to have the highest sales. Also, it is predicted that by the end of the coming year other companies will have the highest market shares.
To begin, Jack and Jones company is expected to begin with a sales of around 0.45 million jeans in January. Then is is predicted that the sales will decrease to around 0.2 million in February. However from February onwards, it is expected that the company will have a steady growth in sales and by July and August the sales will reach around 0.4 Million. By the end of the year, in December, it is predicted that the company will sell around 0.9 million jeans. Looking at the pie chart the company will get 30% of the market shares.
In the case of Mango corporation, the sales is expected to begin at around 0.2 million jeans in January. From February onwards it is predicted that the sales of jeans will increase gradually and by August it will reach around 0.5 million. Then it is expected to show a steady growth and by December, the esmation suggests that the company will sell around 0.6 million jeans. In terms of the pie chart, Mango Corporation is predicted to receive only 20% of the market shares, which is lesser than that of other companies(50%).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...und 0.45 million jeans in January. Then is is predicted that the sales will decrease ...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ease to around 0.2 million in February. However from February onwards, it is expected t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 267.0 196.424390244 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60299625468 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37799697545 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.38202247191 0.547539520022 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6989857742 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.5384615385 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29945238661 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138801588109 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130153030417 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237105628097 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181385811175 0.0819641961636 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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