The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.
The bar chart illustrate that expedition of jeans for two companies for next year in Turkey while pie chart depicts the market value of two companies at the end of the year.
Overall, Jeans of Jack and Jones company is most popular over the period. Apart from two months namely July and August. In this two months, Mango companies Jeans is sold higher than other companies.
From the bar graph, it is clear that Jeans of Jack and Jones company will be most popular in next year around at 450 thousand of pairs compared with 150 thousand of pairs will be sold by Mango co. The sale of mango company jeans will experience an increase steadily to 500 thousand of pairs for following 7 months. Afterwards, the sale of jeans of mango company will see similar for four consecutive months before expected that it will witness a rise by 100 thousands of pairs jeans at the end of next year. Since, Jack and Jones company will sale their product in February accounting for about 200 thousand of pairs. Then, the sell of jeans will grow up gradually by this company until the end of November. Furthermore, At the end of year, selling of jeans will climb drastically, end of up with about 900 thousand of pairs of jeans that will stand at peak point over the period of 12 months.
From Pie charts, market revenue will be estimated for three distinct companies namely, mango company, Jack and Jones company and other company. The prediction shows that there will be a highest market value of the other company stand at 50% by subsequent year. Whereas, only 20% market share will be forecasted for mango company compared with 30% for Jack and Jones company in next year's in Turkey.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t from two months namely July and August .In this two months, Mango companies Jean...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '450 thousand'.
Suggestion: 450 thousand
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '150 thousand'.
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...at 450 thousands of pairs compared with 150 thousands of pairs will be sold by Mango co. The sal...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '500 thousand'.
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...will experience an increase steadily to 500 thousands of pairs for following 7 months. Afterward...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '100 thousand'.
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...ected that it will experience a rise by 100 thousands of pairs jeans at the end of next year. Si...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '200 thousand'.
Suggestion: 200 thousand
...roduct in February accounting for about 200 thousands of pairs. Then the sell of jeans will grow...
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...y this company until the end of November and. At the end of year, sale of jeans w...
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...Jack and Jones company and other company . The prediction shows that there will be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, whereas, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 295.0 196.424390244 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62033898305 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31678686323 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430508474576 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1914459752 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467053775736 0.215688989381 217% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195487939522 0.103423049105 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14267303847 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351405656562 0.15604864568 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178247087016 0.0819641961636 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.