2.The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.

The graph describe the approximate sale of jeans in thousand of pairs in two different companies of the next year in Turkey.

Mango. Co company start of it purchases sale from 150,000 pairs in January but the sales have increases upward to estimated of 450,000 pairs in July the sales continues to rise up to approximately 500,000 pairs in August and the purchases remain the same until November. In the December the sales increase the highest purchases of 600,000 pairs.

Meanwhile Jack & Jone Co. company the sales start of in 450,000 pairs but the company sales have decreases in February to 250,000 pairs meanwhile in the next four month the sell begin to increases upward to 400,000 pairs in June the sales remain the same until August. In September the sell continues to increase up again to 600,000 pairs and the sales remain the same, until the last sales increase once again expectantly of 900,000 pairs in December.

Overall Jack & Jone Co company have higher sales than Mango.Co company and the end of the graph shows at the end of next years both companies is 20% to 30% of respectively.However there are month that the sales remain equal.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: describes
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The graph describe the approximate sale of jeans in thousand of...
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...cribe the approximate sale of jeans in thousand of pairs in two different companies of ...
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...o rise up to approximately 500,000 pairs in August and the purchases remain the s...
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Suggestion: Meanwhile,
... highest purchases of 600,000 pairs. Meanwhile Jack & Jone Co. company the sales start...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'increase'.
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...n the next four month the sell begin to increases upward to 400,000 pairs in June the sal...
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...Co company have higher sales than Mango.Co company and the end of the graph shows ...
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Suggestion: However
...companies is 20% to 30% of respectively.However there are month that the sales remain e...
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Suggestion: However,
...companies is 20% to 30% of respectively.However there are month that the sales remain e...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'months'?
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...o 30% of respectively.However there are month that the sales remain equal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85353535354 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59036194382 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2335751049 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.166666667 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213994240646 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145036821254 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126928082465 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196465395798 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124416162208 0.0819641961636 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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