The given graph pedicts that the regular physical activities by the different age groups ranging from 15 to 65 and over. Moreover, it differs in two groups Australian male's and female's and as compare to men we see that women's are more active in year 2010.
The percentage of men's are influential in age group 15 to 24. However, percentage decreased instantly in senior person's of 35 to 44 age group is approximately 13%. Moreover, this age groups men are less active than other groups. Additionally, percentage went up to the age group 65 and over it is nearby 47%.
In other hand, the most active female's were 45 to 54 which corresponds 53.3%. Moreover, young women's less active compare to men age 15 to 24. As well as, it is necessary to mention that the male and female who are in age group 65 and over are nearly the same with 46.7% and 47.1% respectively.
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...luential in age group 15 to 24. However, percentage decreased instantly in senior...
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...to 54 which corresponds 53.3%. Moreover, young womens less active compare to men ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55769230769 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59065577994 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6016877186 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38078358159 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167226932211 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720668920668 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270005494323 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784417568121 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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