The Bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian Men and women in different age group who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Sumarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.
The picture describes how men and women in Australia are doing their Physical Activity in 2010. Men and Women of age group of 15 and above are taken into consideration for the comparison.
Women of age 15 to 24 shows a percentage of 47.7% when compared to Men whose are just above 50%. Men between 35 to 44 age are very lazy enough to do their physical activities when comparing with women with a difference of almost 13% between them. Women of the age from 35 to 64 maintains the same percentage of about 53% whereas men of the same age group gain the importance as the age grows which is proved by the increase in their percentage from 40% to 45%.Women after the age of 65 become more reluctant to do their everyday physical activities and come down to men , maintaining almost the same percentage of men and women who do their physical activities.
On a overall view we understand that the importance of physical activities are more in women when compared to men in the year 2010. Both women and men needs to carry out their physical activities equally so that they can lead a healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Women
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52261306533 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57262511843 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492462311558 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.561278216 43.030603864 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.571428571 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293671037464 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157511786057 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032080811439 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219109368034 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354599312738 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.