The bar represents the information about the number of Australian men and women in different age groups percentagewise who did physical activity on a regular basis in the year 2010.
Overall,it can be observed that in Australia young men within the age of 15-24 engage in physical exercises more frequently than rest of the men. Also,women within the age group of 45 to 54 indulge in physical activities most frequently than rest of men and women.
First of all,Australian men with age of 15 to 24 workout very regularly in 2010.Then,The number of men engaging in physical exercises decreases as the age increases until the age of 45.The amount on men doing physical exercises with age group of 25 to 34 and 35 to 44 accounted for 42.2% and 39.5% respectively.After that,the men with age of above 45 started indulging in exercises more frequently.Finally,the men with age of 65 and over
Second of all,the young women in Australia work out less frequently when compared to young men and accounted for 47.7% only.Then,the percentage of women doing physical exercises increased as the age increased till the age of 45.Eventually,the women of age 65 and above exercised almost as regularly as men which accounted for a percentage of 47.1%
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, second, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02415458937 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33087495987 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487922705314 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 22.4926829268 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 278.2322546 43.030603864 647% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.0 112.824112599 230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.75 22.9334400587 226% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.23603664747 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399193640393 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.29509925815 0.103423049105 285% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15718456277 0.0843802449381 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299226935592 0.15604864568 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144569151678 0.0819641961636 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.1 13.2329268293 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 61.2550243902 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 10.3012195122 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.9970731707 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.