The bar graph illustrate the proportion of various age groups Australia men and women who engaged themselves to regular physical activities.
Overall the percentage of male is very high teenagers with 52.8 and whereas female the age group between 45-54 is very high rather than all age group with the percentage of 53.3
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Odiljon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...selves to regular physical activities. Overall the percentage of male is very h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 33.7804878049 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 270.0 965.302439024 28% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 53.0 196.424390244 27% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09433962264 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.69816787641 3.73543355544 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56603773585 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 38.0 106.607317073 36% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716981132075 0.547539520022 131% => OK
syllable_count: 81.9 283.868780488 29% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.5 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 135.0 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291208255868 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23064036788 0.103423049105 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923226116197 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23064036788 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923226116197 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 40.7170731707 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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