the bar graph depicts how the citizens of Australia take part in regular physical activities in year 2010.Those people are categorized in six age groups.
Overview,the teenager men show higher interest in physical activities while in rest of age groups women are more engaged with regular fitness work.
In order to stay fit and healthy teenager male(15 to 24) put more efforts which was 52.8% at the same time it was least preformed by females(47.7%).The difference of around 10% were noticed between both sexes aged of 35 to 44 and 45 to 64.
Taking rest of the information into account,interestingly,similarity was observed between both genders who were grey haired people(near about 47%).The percentile of 55 to 64 aged male and female lied between 45.1 to 53.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: tamimadnan6240
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 636.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 126.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.60995097359 2.65546596893 136% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.722222222222 0.547539520022 132% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.5875627631 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.0 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235469018343 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142619171289 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102255040365 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142619171289 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102255040365 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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