The bar chart compares the proportion of men and women in Australia who did physical activities on a regular basis in 2010. The result is divided into six age groups.
Overall, the figure for females who did regular physical activity saw an upward trend as their age increased, while males generally witnessed an opposite trend. In addition, this proportion of men reached its peak in the 15-24 age group and the peak of women was in 45-54.
Regarding the situation of Australian men, 52.8% of males aged 15 to 24 did regular physical activities, which was the highest among all age groups. As age increased, fewer men took part in regular physical activities. This figure for men aged 25-34 and 35-44 is only at 42.2% and 39.5%, respectively. However, the percentage saw a gradual increase in the last three age groups and reached a high of 46.7% in the age group of 65 and over.
By contrast, the figure for 15 to 24-year-old women who did regular physical activities in 2010 is 47.7%, lower than the percentage of males. This proportion saw considerable growth as the age increased, reaching its peak at 53.3% in the age group of 45-54. In addition, the figure for women surpassed that for men in all age groups except 15-24. The percentage for women aged 55-64 and 65 and over is 53% and 47.1%, respectively.
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- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74782608696 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62653321863 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2024203172 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435253933528 0.215688989381 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178670442821 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111497620387 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309992201636 0.15604864568 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745654911826 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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