The bar chart below depict the proportion of Australian men and women from various age categories who exercised regularly in 2010. Overall, it is readily apparent that female did more exercises than men, except for people aged 15 to 24.
In detail, it is noticeable that most women who constantly trained were those at the age 45 to 54, at 53.3%. This category was then followed by men aged 55 to 64 and 35 to 44, who had similar percentages, at 53% and 52.5%, respectively. Next, 48.9% of females aged 25 to 34 regularly exercised. It was then followed with men aged 15 to 24 where 47.7% of them regularly did physical activity. Lastly, women aged 65 and over became the least active, where only 47.1% did regular exercise.
Meanwhile, 52.8% males aged 15 to 24 exercised regularly. This became the most category for men who did regular physical activity. The number was then followed by men in 65 and over age group, where 46.7% of them consistently exercised. After that, 45.1% of 55 to 64 years old men constantly did physical activity. Next, men aged 45 to 54 and 25 to 34 who exercised regularly were 43.1% and 42.2%, respectively. Then, males aged 35 to 44 were the least to did constant physical activity, where it was only 39.5% of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'exercised' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'exercises'.
Suggestion: exercises
... Meanwhile, 52.8% males aged 15 to 24 exercised regularly. This became the most categor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, then, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64414414414 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60708097218 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.412749964 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.3076923077 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360911340624 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147640689289 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950468307994 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282521090696 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056283960509 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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