The bar chart illustrates the percentage of men and women who had regular physical activity, in Australia in 2010, in terms of their age group.
The figures show that almost half of people exercised regularly, while women are shown to be more physically active than men.
According to the diagram, the proportion of males is more, by roughly 5 percent, at the youngest studied age, which is 15 to 24 years. Whereas, for the rest of the age groups the greater percentage belongs to females. Except for the oldest group, where two genders seem to have approximately the same activity rates, at about 47 percent.
On the other hand, the overall trends for exercising also represent different patterns for each sex, so that for men there is a decrement from 52.8 to 39.5 percent, until the age 44, following by an increment to 47.6 at the age of 65 and over. Besides, women's physical activity rose from 47.7 to 53 percent as they grew older, and finally reduces by 4 percent at about 65 years old.
- Many people choose to learn practical subjects therefore theoretical subjects will no longer be taught in universities Do you agree or disagree 56
- More and more people use private cars instead of taking public transport What are the reasons for this trend How can the government encourage people to take public transport Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own know 67
- Some people believe that individuals who earn a lot of money are the most successful Others say that the individuals who contribute to the society such as scientists or teachers are the most successful Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period
- Some people think that school should reward students who show the best academic results while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, if, so, whereas, while, except for, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69886363636 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50340032186 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8034844054 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.142857143 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322053646696 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152570153281 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141704840992 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222685133542 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151763766431 0.0819641961636 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.