The given chart compares the proportion of each gender in Australia at 6 groups of ages engaging in physical exercise regularly in the year 2010.
Overall, in the year 2010, the percentage of women doing physical activity is higher than men did in all ages, except for ones ranged from 15 to 24 years old.
In 2010, boys at the ages of 15 to 24 exercise physically accounted for 52.8%, but till 35 to 44, the proportion for this activism was slightly declinded (39.5%). By contrast, this figure for women gradually increased from 47,7% when at 15 to 24 years old to 52.5% in the age of 35 to 44.
However, when men turned to over 45 years old, they began to exercise more, especialy senior male aged from 65 and over (46.7%). Meanwhile, there was an opposite trend in the number of women exercise physically in these groups of ages. After reaching a peak at 53.3% when at 45 to 54 years old, women became less actively, this figure for them at these ages fell by 47.1% when they are 65 years old and over.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41397849462 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2993725486 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.8090039447 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20758995361 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116642174772 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685531328798 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157094384156 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593341048939 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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