The bar depicts how the percentage of Australian men and women involved in regular physical activities varied among various age groups in 2010.
It is evident that more than half of the women in all age groups (except 15 to 24 and 65 above) are involved in some kind of physical activity whereas the trend had been in stark difference among men. In all age groups, less than 50% of men were involved ,except15 to 24 group, where 52.8% of men were recorded to be engaged in regular physical work.
If we consider age wise, females have surpassed the percentage of males in the comparison of all ages except for the younger age group(15-24 year old) where boys were seen to be more involved in any sort of physical activity regularly.
However, if we observer the change in trend gender wise, then we can observe that the percentage of males involved in physical activities has varied a lot with 39.5 being the lowest and 52.8% being the highest. Meanwhile, the percentage of females being involved in physical exercises has only slightly varied from 47.1% to 53.3 % among different age groups.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...roups, less that 50% of men are involved , when it comes to any kind of regular ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, except for, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 664.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57931034483 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4723655637 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.898509455 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.0 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.25 22.9334400587 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.23603664747 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354227131757 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.248882552978 0.103423049105 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139240183176 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283210954988 0.15604864568 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152338214488 0.0819641961636 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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