The provided chart give information on the ratio of male and female residents of Australia with various age categories which performed regular physical movement in 2010.
In general, Australian adult women were more interested in performing frequent body activity than men. Moreover, it can be clearly seen that the proportion of boys who could have done the activity increased slightly and then decreased by increasing their age, while this trend was opposite for girls.
Getting back to the details, females are more attracted in comparison to males in order to have a plan to do regular movement, except for the age group of 15-24, when the second most percent of men's activity has illustrated (It was exactly at 52.8%). Looking at age groups, there was a considerable progress in proportion of regular activity which has been performed by women to reach at a peak of 53.3 percent for middle-age those in 45 to 54, before final reducing. By contrast, it has reduced sharply to arrive just under 40% for male citizens who were spending the fourth decade of their life. Then, the frequent activity was moved upward by 65 and over aged when males and females acted approximately the same and fixed around 47%.
- some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 78
- some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'considerable progress'.
Suggestion: considerable progress
...52.8%. Looking at age groups, there was a considerable progress in proportion of regular activity which...
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Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ximately the same and fixed around 47%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, second, so, then, while, except for, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93137254902 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58617342115 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1773932928 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.714285714 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235787367008 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104867079276 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465190141534 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157960997108 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00449184432129 0.0819641961636 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.