The bar chart below shows the result of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and show factor affecting
The given histogram chart depicts the information about the results of survey, which is conducted among two different groups aged employees between 18-30 and 45-60 years it reveals the factor affecting their work perfomance. The data is calibrated in percentum.
It can be seen that the individuals who aged are between (18-30) years have maximum over 90% chance for personal development and(45-60) years aged have 40% whereas, the team spirit are same in both aged groups is near about 60% repectively.
On the other hand that the individuals who aged are between(18-30) years least 20% job security whereas, between(45-60) years is double than(18-30) years. Moreover the affect of money between the aged(18-30) and(45-60) is less than 80% .
Overall, it is evident that the least factor affect work perfomance in work environment and the highest in change of personal development.
- Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means other believe that these games are contributed to children development.the discuss both view and give your apinion 67
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001 73
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, 2001. 67
- The bar chart below shows the result of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and show factor affecting 56
- Nowadays people throw away old things and adapt new things. Do the disadvantage of throwaway society outweigh any possible economics advantage? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...n45-60 years is double than18-30 years. Moreover the affect of money between the aged18-...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the aged18-30 and45-60 is less than 80% . Overall, it is evident that the leas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30935251799 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72969311275 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625899280576 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.8021974285 43.030603864 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249851570303 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111157120118 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962099483522 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148231695944 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860234895196 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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