The bar chart provides information on generation electricity and the amount of used it in 10 top countries during 2014.
Overall, it can be seen that, China and USA had highest number for production electricity. Furthermore, Germany was the only country that the utilization electricity in it, was higher than manufacture it.
Looking at the chart set for more detail, it is clear that, China with 5,398 ( billion kwh) production electricity was at the top of the chart, which consumes up 5,322 ( billion kwh) of this amount. Then, there is USA with 4,099 ( billion kwh) generation and 3,866 ( billion kwh) consumption.
After that, the number of generation and consumption electricity in other countries decreased sharply, so that Russia was in third place on chart with , 1,057( billion kwh) production and 1,038 ( billion kwh) consumption, followed closely by there are Japan and India, at 936,2 and 871 ( billion kwh) generation energy, and 857,4 and 674,98 ( billion kwh) usage respectively.
Canada, French and Brazil there are in places six to eight of the chart. then, Germany, with 526,6 ( billion kwh) generation energy, but 582,5 ( billion kwh) consumption it, was the only country that the consumption electricity was higher than production. also, Korea, Rep, the amount of production and usage were completely equal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 3.97073170732 428% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79169850763 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.0456950249 43.030603864 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.888888889 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229087478836 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109695038151 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086756063403 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162791013554 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797529338664 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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