The given bar chart depicts the manufacture and usage of a specific energy, namely "electricity", in 10 different regions around the world, which took place in 2014.
Overall, it can be seen that China is the country which contributed for the largest data of the chart totally, compared to the smallest figure of that in Korea, Rep. It is also clear that 9 out of 10 enlisted countries produced more than consumed, exept Germany.
According to the chart, while China's electricians produced 5,398 billion kWh of electricity and used 5,322 billion kWh by Chinese, the figure of the same sector was only 485,1 and 449,5 in Korea, respectively. United States was the second-highest country of electricity's production and utilization, more than 4000 and around 3900 billion kWh was produced and consumed at that moment. Furthermore, Russia and Japan also made up a significant number in both sectors, ranging from 850 to 1100 billion kWh.
Also in that chart, it is noticeable that India produced 871 and wasted 698.8 billion kWh of electricity, these numbers decreased to only 618.9 and about 500 billion kWh in Canada. Moreover, Brazil and Germany were two countries that had nearly the same proportion in both bold and faded sectors, all around 500 billion kWh. The remaining 561,2 and 462,9 billion kWh is allocated for France's manufacture and exhaustion, make it the seventh-highest country of top 10.
- Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects other people think in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both the views and give your opinion 73
- Some people think that to be successful you need to get in university education whereas others say it is not true Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion 89
- The table shows the number of mobile phones and personal computers per 1000 people in 2003 in 6 different counties Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults aged 16 years and over whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months 78
- Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime However a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education Agree or disagree 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15151515152 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02994432014 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8739295165 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.0 112.824112599 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118199311959 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060749137634 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291801718611 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774855863219 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138298221678 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.2329268293 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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