The bar chart critically compares the ranking ten countries of electricity produced and consumed in the year 2014.
It is clear that China was the biggest country of producing and consuming electricity and the United States ranked number two. Moreover, the production of electricity in most of the countries was more than the consumption of electricity except for Germany.
Obviously, China was the top one country on production and consumption of electricity, 5,398 billion kwh and 5,322 billion kwh respectively. While the figures for the United States were around 1,300 billion kwh less than that in China, 4,099 billion kwh for producing electricity and 3,866 billion kwh for expending electricity. In the rest of 8 countries, only Russia possessed the amount above 1,000 billion kwh on both sides.
Specifically, the generation and usage of electricity in Japan and India were similar between about 700 and 940 billion kwh. In terms of usage shown, the amount in Korean, Rep was the lowest which were both below 500 billion kwh. Also, there was one remarkable exception that Germany's consumption of electricity was 582.5 billion kwh which was more than producing electricity at 526.6 billion kwh.
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 73
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- The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27461139896 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81031607707 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512953367876 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.12021705 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.111111111 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145762246796 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813416939318 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666924461605 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124985802114 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583484480892 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.