The bar chart illustrates data about the number of utilization and usage of electricity in ten countries in 2014.
As we can see, China is the top of the list, both for producing and consuming electricity. China produced 5398 billion kWh and used 5322 billion kWh. On the second rank is United States, that generated 4099 billion kWh and used 3866 billion kWh.
Following United States is Russia, which its utilization and consumption of electricity were about four times lower than United States. It only produced 1057 billion kWh and used 1038 billion kWh. After Russia, there are 7 more countries that generated and used electricity below 1000 billion kWh. They are Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea Rep. Among those countries, Korea Rep was the least country to produce and consume electricity in 2014. It only produced 485.1 billion kWh and consumed 449.5 kWh.
All of those countries had more production than consumption of electricity in 2014, except for Germany. Germany, on the 9th position, consumed 582.5 billion kWh, while it only produced 526.6 billion kWh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16201117318 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53620209932 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4244023274 43.030603864 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207071297743 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130214324393 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108203235367 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170843161978 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108933642895 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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