The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar graph depicts the amount of electricity produced and consumed by the world’s top ten energy users in 2014. The scale is in billions.

First of all, in 2014, China was the world leader in electricity production and consumption, with over 5000 kWh for each. The USA was in second place, producing and consuming about one-fifth less than China. Russia was the third country with figures crossing 1000 kWh and it utilized almost all the energy that was produced. On the other hand, the last country on the list was Korea Republic with production of 485.1 kWh and consumption of 449.5 kWh, and it was almost half of Japan (fourth on list).

Secondly, France and Brazil (the seventh and eight-placed countries) both produced and consumed similar amounts of electricity at around 550 kWh and 450 kWh for production and consumption respectively. India had the highest difference of 170 kWh. Interestingly, the penultimate country, Germany, consumed more energy than it could generate (526.6 kWh) and the difference was more than 50 kWh.

Overall, it is clear to see that China and the USA produced and consumed significantly more electricity than any other country. Noticeably, Germany was the only country in the Top 10 that consumed more electricity than it produced.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, third, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08571428571 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80800604686 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538095238095 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.026015407 43.030603864 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200727708176 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975327201677 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835547029592 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138802266039 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495319891679 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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