The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Submitted by doubletee on Wed, 08/14/2019 - 13:18

The bar chart below illustrates the amount of electricity generation and utilization in ten countries in 2014. Overall, it can be seen that China was on the first place, where Korea Rep. was on the last place. Furthermore, Germany was the only country that consumed electricity more than produced it.

China was on the first place, with quite similar amount in production and consumption, at 5398 billion kWh and 5322 billion kWh, respectively. Following China, there was United States, that generated 4099 billion kWh while utilized 3866 billion kWh. After United States, there stood Russia on the third place, where the amount of generation and usage also does not differ significantly, at 1057 billion kWh and 1038 billion kWh, respectively. Furthermore, Japan produced 936.2 billion kWh while used 856.7 billion kWh, made them stood at the fourth place. Following Japan was India, that generated 871 billion kWh while only used 698.8 billion kWh. Canada was on the sixth place, with amount generated at 618.9 billion kWh and utilized 499.9 billion kWh electricity.

France, Brazil, and Germany had similar amount of electricity generation and usage, ranging from around 450 billion kWh to approximately 560 billion kWh. France was the highest among them, with the electricity production at 561.2 billion kWh and electricity usage at 462.9 billion kWh. Following France, there was Brazil, that generated 530.7 billion kWh electricity while utilized 455.8 billion kWh. After that there was Germany, with production amount at 526.6 billion kWh while used 582.5 billion kWh. This made Germany as the only country that has consumption amount exceeded its generation amount. At the last place was Korea Rep that produced 485.1 billion kWh while only used 449.5 billion kWh.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 965.302439024 155% => OK
No of words: 282.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30496453901 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54632646806 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436170212766 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.613909168 43.030603864 371% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.6 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.076452073392 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558175632256 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731887322211 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869870981699 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570699567735 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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