The bar chart illustrates how much households owning and renting accommodation in the UK and Wales from 1918 to 2011. Overall, the proportion of households renting accommodation declined noticeably from first to end the year; in contrast, the percentage of an owned house increased. According to the data, the highest proportion of people who lived in a rented house was around 78% in 1918 while the owned accommodation was the least proportion, at over 20%. In 1971, the percentage of both owned and rented accommodation was in the same, at 50%. Besides, after 1971, the rate of the owned house increased gradually to reach near 70% until 2001. However, the rate of owned homes fell slightly and the percentage of rented homes rose.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: n0air9x9
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
The bar chart illustrates how much households owning and renting accommoda...
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Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o lived in a rented house was around 78% in 1918 while the owned accommodation wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 611.0 965.302439024 63% => OK
No of words: 123.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9674796748 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86536638884 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552845528455 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8921997097 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0378678596783 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0213844901487 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0224142906158 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0378678596783 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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