The bar chart below shows types of media to get the daily news, by age group in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar chart depicts detailed information about how people in different ages group used 3 forms of media to receive daily news in 2011.
Overall, radio was of the largest usage by people aged 18 and more, whereas microblogging accounted for the least percentage in both five age groups. The number of people using social networking was seen to decrease significantly as they got older.
In 2011, the main kind of media for adolescents to get news was social networking (80%), while the figure for radio was half and that of microblogging was even lower (20%). The same statistic of social media went for people aged from 18 to 29, but the figure for radio was in the highest place (over 90%) and microblogging accounted for around 25%.
In terms of the middle-age (the 30-49s and the 50-64s), radio was still the most popular type of media with the percentage of around 90%, while those of social networking was 10% different and around 25% standing the figure for microblogging. The three statistics of radio, social networking, and microblogging both reached their bottom in the 65 and older age group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, whereas, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87368421053 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66080611783 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.4787873005 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.285714286 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153714046503 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086063310706 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863309884817 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122253638925 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959395979416 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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