Bar chart : Fiction book sales, 2006 – 2010 (young adult, classics, mystery, romance and science and fantasy)
The figure elucidates the number of the sales of five fiction books from 2006 to 2010. At first glance, it is evident that over the entire period, romance has the most enormous sale numbers in comparison with other books.
To begin with, 2006 to 2010 witnessed a dramatic palpitation for the number of book sales for romance in which it, initially, stood at just above 160.000 in 2 and terminated at well under 100.000 in 2010. Following the same pattern as romance, mystery, which has the lower number book sales rather than romance, faced a significant fluctuation and finished at just under sixty thousand-tenths by the end of the period shown.
In accordance with the other books, over the whole period, young adult and classics, additionally, experienced a gradual wave between 2006, which made up at well beneath 40.000 and just less than twenty thousand-tenths respectively, and 2010, which constituted approximately at 25.000 and 10.000 respectively. Furthermore, at first, the sales of sci-fi and fantasy, which has the lowest score compared to other books, increased significantly to 20.000, nevertheless, it also palpitated steadily in the next 3 years and finished at just below 200.000 in 10.
- children today are too dependent on computer and electronic entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastime than spending all day indoors. 73
- The maps : the plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment. 67
- Bar chart : the percentage of boys, girls and all for chatting on the internet and playing on games console. 78
- Some of people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. 61
- Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18367346939 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95026806115 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7155798681 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.333333333 112.824112599 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 5.23603664747 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144582209373 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08766928745 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675735404369 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110386718646 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305793711719 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.2329268293 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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