The bar chart illustrates the quantities of six distinct assortments of books which were boreowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 whereas the pie chart demonstrates the proportion of genders who had taken membership in 2010.
Overall, it is evident that while in both aforementioned years, the number of romance books were at the peak point, the language books borrowed was minimal. In the second chart, undoubtedly, the ratio of women to men was approximately 2:1.
The majority of folks borrowed romance books which was 1000 and 1400 in 1991 and 2001 respectively. By contrast, only 100 language books were borrowed in 1991, however small increment in 2001, and reached to 200. Crime novels and children's fiction books plunged from 500 to 200 and 650 to 480 in both year respectively. The prominent changes occured with self improvement books whose number rose dramatically from 200 to nearly equal to 1000. However, autobiographies was same in both year and accounted for approximately 380.There was slightly increment on thriller books from 600 to 800 in 2001.
The number of women was twice that of men, who took membership at Lammertown Public Library in 2010.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 526, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ear and accounted for approximately 380.There was slightly increment on thriller book...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12371134021 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88497745383 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572164948454 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3148110309 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.444444444 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257868655662 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108613558299 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840951151562 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180273889416 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846754980903 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.