Despite of the advances introduced in agriculture sector, numerous folks around the global still facing starvation. This essay will discuss causes and provide efficient solution to eradicate the problem.The sky-rocketing population and drastic food price are the causes of scarcity of food. The government has responsibility to free their country from going hungry.
The growth rate of population of the present world is comparatively high due to which the demand of food is also automatically increases. In spite of advanced technology implemented on agriculture not enough to accomplish substantially. In addition, due to excessive uses of farm machinery, the food items experienced huge increment on initial growing cost. Hence, consumer have to invest huge proportion of their income just to buy scanty food products. However, whose economic situation is not good and not able to affort expensive agriculture products, high probability to suffer through famish.
To address the problem of hungry, not only government but developed country as well play vital role to cure the hungry. Government should increase its contact with businessman of agriculture by offering different assortment of schemes like subsidies on seeds, fertilizer and even in farm implements. If the experts give appropriate agriculture suggestion, it will assist to maintain the quality as well as quantity of food grains. Consequently, the additional price will not be mention on agriculture products due to reduced initial cost of growing. Furthermore, government should focus to maintain the rate of population so that ease to supply substantial food to hungry. Developed country are helping through NGOs and INGOs to serve food but it increases dependence on other people for food.
To sum up, the deficency of food leads people hard to survive that's why the price of food should be affortable. If the expenses of growing crop is posdible to minimize, accessible of food for low income will be high.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, well, in addition, as well as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42071197411 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02943046075 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585760517799 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8770379632 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.6875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123490278452 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409383361436 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363290976284 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805659337476 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422271085526 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.