the bar chart shows active participation rates in top ten sports in Canada in 1998 and 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart below illustrates the percentage of participation rates in top ten sports in 1998 and 2005 in Canada.
As can be seen from the chart, participation rates in all sports decreased significantly in 2005 except for soccer. The most popular athletics are ice hockey and golf.
Golf was started with dropped down from 23% in 1998 to 21% in 2005. Following that, ice hockey is the favorite sport after golf also began with at 17% in 1998 and declined 1% in in 2005. The proportion of people joining in baseball in 1998 were 17%. After 7 years, this number fell enormously over 10%. In addition, the swimming participants rates reduced from 13% to about 10%.
In 1998, the quantity of people playing Tennis, Cycling, Downhill/ skiing, Volleyball and Basketball were about 8%. And there were minimally decreased of 1 to 2% in the participation rates of these sports in 2005. Different with others exercises, soccer was the only sports had tended to increased in 2005 from 9% in 1998 to around 10% players.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...gan with at 17% in 1998 and declined 1% in in 2005. The proportion of people joining ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79428571429 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67679979506 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.294788236 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2727272727 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259497843944 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106699195008 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116793374724 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207131782734 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130139757851 0.0819641961636 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.