The figures reveal the emigration of Britons to 5 countries from 2004 and 3 years later. It is clearly seen that British emigrants preferred Australia compared to other locations. Also, Spain and New Zealand followed the same downward trend over the years while fluctuation was observed in Australia, in the USA and France.
Australia in 2004 had 41 thousand emigrants but this fell by two thousand in 2005. It then considerably rose up to 52 thousand, its highest over the years but was followed by a downfall in the last year with only 43 thousand, a little higher than that of the first period. Nearly the same trend is seen in the USA and France where they started with over 20% but the emigrants in the usa fell in 2005 with only 18 thousand while france reached it peaked at 35 thousand. In 2006, the usa was back to over 20 thousand and France plummeted to 25 thousand. At the end of the period both countries had a little under 20 thousand emigrants.
On the other hand, Spain and New zealand started with higher numbers of emigrants with 35 thousand and 25 thousand respectively, but as the years went by a decrease by 2 to 3 thousand was noticed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62200956938 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53550597508 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516746411483 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7192115786 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0526354544363 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324421220139 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341652848633 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0434741797963 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237142130465 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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