A bar chart shows the changes in the total population of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000 and changes in birth and death rates
The given column graphs illustrate the changes and differences in the number of total citizens, fertility rate and death rate of England and Wales, over a 300-year period between 1700 and 2000. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that although there were downward trends in the birth rate and death rate, the total population increased considerably over the period.
In particular, when it comes to population growth, the figure started at 5 million people in the beginning of the period before rising sharply to double number in population size in 1800. At this point, the year 1900 witnessed a significant growth by 20 million in the population. Afterwards, there was a substantial increase to 50 million people in the number of citizens, which accounted for the highest number and was ten-fold higher than that in population size in 1700.
Meanwhile, the rate of birth per 1000 people was constantly higher than that of death. As can be seen, the birth rate stood at 30 in 1700, compared to 20 for death rate. After that, the graph experienced a dramatic rise of 20 for fertility and death rates in 1800, which occupied the highest rates. Then, in terms of birth rate, the figure was 28 in 1900 and levelled off at this rate in the following 100 years, in comparison with 25,19 respectively for the mortality rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83771929825 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58887500211 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535087719298 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8257569496 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.555555556 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288791803678 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123133969619 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09100147735 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200037262303 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122440060499 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.